Concept project · Cybersecurity consultancy

We break in before criminals do.

Security testing and staff training for growing businesses, explained in plain English. The only thing we hide is your data.

Finding 01Critical

Former staff could still log in.

One account used the password . We were in on the first try.

Sample data. The bar hides a sample password on purpose.

Fix: disable leavers on their last day.

DisclosureConcept project. Redacted is an original fictional company created by CVO Atlas to show its branding work. It is not a real business.

Serious work. Plain words.

An imagined team of ethical hackers. Their clients are owners and IT managers who find security frightening and full of jargon, so the identity is exact where it counts, plain everywhere else, and dry enough to keep people reading.

$ redacted --brief
who   owners and IT managers of growing businesses
fear  security feels frightening and full of jargon
job   test, explain, train
tone  trustworthy · precise · a little dry

03 · Colour & Type

Carbon, Paper, Highlighter.

Carbon and Paper do most of the work, and Highlighter marks what to act on. Signal Pink means one thing only: critical risk.

The Redacted palette
NameHexRole
Carbon#1B1C1EPrimary
Paper#F1F1ECPrimary
Highlighter#E4F04APrimary · marks what to act on
Signal Pink#FF4D79Critical only
Graphite#686B70Support
Fog#D9DAD4Support
Hanken Grotesk · what we say

We found 3 ways in.

Here they are, in order, and how to close each one.

Space Mono · what we found

$ vpn-audit --stale
7 accounts inactive > 90 days
FINDING 01 · CONFIDENTIAL

Redact

Passwords:

Black bars hide only what is genuinely sensitive, such as a password in a report. Here the bar hides a sample password.

Highlight

Disable leavers on day one.

Highlighter marks the fix: one action per section, never decoration.

Rank

Critical
Signal Pink, used for nothing else. Fix first. Sample: former staff can still log in remotely.
High
Highlighter. Fix soon. Sample: no two-step login on email.
Medium
Paper with a Carbon border. Plan it in. Sample: old software on the public website.
Low
Paper with a Graphite border. Tidy up when convenient. Sample: the server shows its version number.

Four labels rank every finding, always in this order. Nothing a reader needs is hidden or left to a hover.

04 · The report

The report is the product.

A penetration test report a business owner can read in ten minutes. Every finding is ranked by risk and by the time it takes to fix, and every finding ends with an action.

Three pages of a Redacted penetration test report: the cover reading We found 3 ways in, a ranked summary of four findings, and a detailed critical finding.

Sample report · Summary

Four things to fix. One of them this week.

Choose a finding to read it the way the client would. Example Logistics Ltd is fictional, and so is every finding: no real test took place.

Finding 01Critical

Former staff can still log in remotely.

What we did
We tried the remote-access login with accounts from a public staff list. Seven accounts belonging to people who left months ago still worked. One used the password , which appears in public breach lists. We were in on the first attempt.
Why it matters
Anyone with that list could reach the file server and the accounts system.
What to do
Disable accounts on a leaver’s last day. Turn on two-step login for every remote account.
Time to fix
About one hour

$ vpn-audit --stale
7 accounts inactive for more than 90 days
1 password found in breach list

Finding 02High

No two-step login on email.

What we did
We checked how staff sign in to email from outside the office. A password on its own is enough, on every mailbox we looked at.
Why it matters
Email is where every other password gets reset. One guessed password opens the lot.
What to do
Turn on two-step login for every mailbox. Start with finance and the directors.
Time to fix
Half a day

$ mail-audit --sign-in
second step required: no

Finding 03Medium

Old software on the public website.

What we did
The website runs a plugin that is two years out of date. Its weaknesses are publicly documented.
Why it matters
Public weaknesses come with public instructions. Nobody needs to be clever.
What to do
Update the plugin and switch on automatic updates. Then check the site still works. It will.
Time to fix
Two hours

$ site-scan --plugins
forms-plugin 2.1.4 · current 4.0.2

Finding 04Low

Server shows its version number.

What we did
The web server tells anyone who asks exactly which software version it runs.
Why it matters
On its own, very little. It saves an attacker some homework.
What to do
Hide the version number in the server settings. Then move on.
Time to fix
15 minutes

$ curl -I example-logistics.example
Server: ExampleServer/2.4.1

A finding page from the sample report: Former staff can still log in remotely, ranked Critical, with the fix highlighted.

Inside a finding page

Six decisions on one page.

Select a note to mark it on the page.

05 · Applications

Around the report.

Everything else follows the same rules: plain sentences, one highlighted action, and Signal Pink only when something cannot wait. From the first letter to the alert nobody wants to receive.

Step 01 · First contact

A proposal with nothing hidden.

The letter sets out scope, timing and what the client receives, and ends on the brand’s promise: the only thing we redact is your data. The card says it in fewer words.

A proposal letter to Example Logistics Ltd for a security test and staff training, with the logo at the top and the bar along the foot.
Business card front: the Redacted logo on Carbon.
Business card back: a fictional name, role and contact details, the symbol, and the line Never email us your password.

Front: the logo on Carbon. Back: a fictional name and contact details, and a dry reminder: never email us your password. We will never ask for it.

Step 02 · Online

A website that says it straight.

The business website uses the same case-file layout as this page: a sidebar index whose bars fill as you read, a sample finding up front, the services in plain words and one clear call to book a test. Even the 404 page keeps the joke going.

The Redacted website on a laptop and phone, in the identity’s case-file layout: a sidebar index with reading-progress bars, the headline We break in before criminals do, a sample critical finding card and the services, with a 404 page reading This page has been redacted.

Step 03 · The walkthrough

Results, in a room, in plain English.

The test results are presented in person. The training slides keep to one number per slide, and the goal fits in one highlighted line.

Title slide on Carbon: How we got in. Results of your security test, in plain English.
Results slide: 31 percent of 120 staff clicked a test phishing link and 4 percent reported it. Goal for next quarter: more reports than clicks.

Sample figures for a fictional client.

Step 04 · On stage

A conference kit with a straight face.

A speaker badge that reads at a distance, and stickers that make the point for you. Signal Pink stays off the merchandise.

A Redacted speaker badge on a lanyard and a sheet of stickers including Nothing to see here and I clicked the link.
Sticker sheet: the symbol, Nothing to see here, the logo, I clicked the link (phishing training survivor), and Your password is followed by a redaction bar.

Step 05 · If it cannot wait

The one place Signal Pink shouts.

An alert email has one job: get the right thing done today. Everything about it is built for that.

A sample critical alert email with a Signal Pink header: A staff password is being sold online, followed by three numbered steps.
  1. 01Pink means critical. The header band is Signal Pink because this alert is critical. A routine email never uses it.
  2. 02The problem in one sentence. A staff password is being sold online. No jargon, no suspense.
  3. 03The secret stays secret. The account is named; the password is not repeated.
  4. 04Three steps, numbered. Reset, sign out everywhere, reply when done.

Sample alert for a fictional client. Redacted is not a real company, and nothing here is monitored.

Reports, slides, conference kits and alert emails show how far the identity can stretch. They are illustrations, not part of a standard package; what each branding package includes is listed on our Branding page.

06 · Guidelines

From the brand guidelines.

Twelve pages that keep the system exact: the bar, colour, type, the rules for redacting and highlighting, motion and voice.

Brand guidelines cover: the Redacted logo on Carbon.
01 · Cover
Guidelines page: the bar, and how it becomes the symbol.
03 · The bar
Guidelines page: the colour palette, with the Signal Pink rule.
06 · Colour
Guidelines page: redact, highlight, rank.
08 · Redact, highlight, rank
Guidelines page: motion, ending on the static logo.
09 · Motion
Guidelines page: the voice, with lines such as Nothing to see here.
10 · Voice